First thing i noticed was the standart sony vegas intro, surely inspired by a tutorial on youtube, followed by some weird gradient color sets.
Editing was fairly poor with bad cuts, awful transitions (calling the black sequenzes like that in need for a better word) and pan/crop fails.
Content looked pretty bad, supported through the bad edit.
Quality was very low. And as for creativity... I didnt see anything new, refreshing or creative in here. Not one bit.
Liked the music nontheless.

Besides, this doesnt look like a trailer at all. It feels more like a minimovie fail. Can´t help but say that I think this should rather be on youtube than on the vault.
Anyway, since you said it was your first attempt ever I won´t judge you too hard, although I won´t up the score because of that :D

Looks more like a first render test or something than a trailer, gl with the final thing though

Looks like the trailer could be made in an hour or two. Hope the full movie is better

idk but it looks like a mini frag movie :) and the editing was poor :) atleast frags were fun to wach anyway good luck with the movie :)

Metz is a nice player,but u guys need more than that to have more score

word of advice when showing a trailer try not to show all the frags you are using, it's probably better if you just show some frags just before they are about to happen then cut them off. The first thing I notice was the standard sony vegas effects. All this guy was using was everything standard in sony vegas, nothing new at all, and very boring.
There was basically no creativity in this film and the editing was all the same editing as you would see in a COTW or just a short frag clip, it was very boring to watch. 4.2 from me

This looks like a mini movie and not a trailer, the editing and the creativity barely are in this movie. Some of the frags are strange, well...i hope it's not another movie full of shit fake/cheat frags with kikoolol overediting.

I hope I am wrong.

Ah let me review this bunch of full crap.

First of all the editer should read the definition of a trailer and watch some cinematic trailer.

Thats the best example how a trailer should NOT be.

creativity 0
content 2 because I saw even enemys
editing 2 oh yeah you can make a gradient and cut to the beat
music 2 holy thats not a trailer music thats just random without soundFX and allways the same beat
quality 3 oh dear the colors and ingame quality is just crap


btw. is themoviefault making some quality controls before uploading such bullsh? Plz back to the rudes!

2.0 thumbs down.

sry this was really bad , just bad cutted , and colors just 1 color gredient red and thats about it , not a real trailer , creativity was very low , just well gl ;x

Didnt like this at all.
boring, and looks like it was made by a guys that edits 1/2 months
the frags arent that big of a deal + the editing makes them look even worst.
dont know wow this got here, but if the movie is gonna be like this... you shouldnt realese it.

2.8

1:24 ... are you serious??
This one is for youtube but nothing you should upload at TheMovieVault!
Get more skills on editing before you start to upload something here.
This is a real epic fail.

Why are you posting this on tmv, when you dont have the editing skills yet. Not to be harsh, but you wont get any good comments, if you post movies when your in the beginning of the editing....
For the review, this is like basically 90 % of the vids on youtube..its very basic

why do low ratE? you guys see the low rates and lowrate too lol
its just sad , most of you dont have oppinion ..
this video is very simple and smoth
not something WOW SICK , but is a solid and clean trailer!
wait for the movie first! or do better and upload it for mv ! :)
everybody like to say bad u suck , but cant do nothing better then half of this :)
byebye

this is not a trailer it's a mini movie
the music is really sik. The editing was poor and the frags against lows

Well.. i guess you need a miracle for making a movie wich gets atleast 5.0+ rating.

I think it's okay that it gets on TMV.. so people can see how a movie NOT should be :)

Try to be more creativity.
Well everyone started with something like that.
For everybody who gaves him rate 3 - 0 shame you.......

Well first off, this is not a trailer. I could give you a long list why its not, but im going to keep this review short. I hated the editing, looked bad and felt rushed. I hope for your sake that the movie will be better than this "trailer".

Hey i jus wanna let u guys know this is my first ever "EVER" attempt at editing anything im totally new to all the software and so on but the main movie will come out maybe 3-4 months from now and even in the past 2 days ive learned a ton more things that could have made this trailer a million times better and also i know the pan and crop and colours where a total fail so plz dont be to harsh on the comments <3 ALSO I want to add all the frags in any movies i make will all be done by me and no1 else plz take tht into consideration <3

well the frags are good but you are wrong. I suggest you to not use a lot of nice frags in the trailer. In trailers you need a nice quality and editing and a lot of imagination :) but if is the first movie its well done :) GL to your next movie and y expect more of you !

This is disgusting. Why would this even be allowed on the Vault? The intro looked like it took 5 minutes to make, and the same gradient colors were on EVERY clip.

This does NOT belong on the MovieVault.

Was this a trailer ? To me looks like a mini-movie...